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    dots Submission Name: The First Day of Foreverdots
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    Author: Cora Windover
    ASL Info:    1,292/it/Radiant Garden
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 862/761/201
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsThe First Day of Foreverdots
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    Some day
    I'll look back on this and say
    "Those were the best days of my life."
    All the bad times will escape me
    No longer will it break me
    That I'm on my own
    In an unfamiliar town
    Alone.

    I'll forget the games I played
    The jobs I worked
    The price I paid
    To live my life this way.

    And I'll forget missing you.
    All of that will fade.
    I'll remember sunshine,
    And kittens,
    And laugher,
    And all of the adventures
    That haven't happened yet
    But they're going to.
    I can promise you
    I won't be sad forever
    No,
    We're no longer together
    But it's
    The first day of forever
    I'm alive.
    And that's what I'll remember
    At the end of time.




    Submitted on 2009-04-01 14:12:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sums up the way I would like to feel at present. So subject wise and the way you put it I enjoyed this piece.
    | Posted on 2009-04-05 00:00:00 | by Shea Comet | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah! I liked the overcoming spirit in this one. If true good for you. I like the look forward to another day message you sent. I wish you power to overcome. Thank you for sharing.

    Kuuipo
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ]



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