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    dots Submission Name: Payback timedots
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    Author: kat12
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Al.
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2/0/2
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Misc/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 665
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1045



    Description:
       I hate those idiotic teachers whom think they know all. I managed 3 min in class today then got kicked out. Such stupidity from those whom call themselves adults.


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    Tell me my wrongs all you please.
    They will never begin to affect me.
    You think I should be rattled by your hollow threats.
    Actually itís amusing to watch you fret.
    Iím tired of your rambling and useless rants.
    Iím done with you telling me I canít.
    You donít know the beginning of life.
    Using young spirits as your sacrifice.
    Is it not my will power you degrade and foil?
    It is your words that ring my neck like a coil!
    To tell you the truth I find you too simple,
    Though you regard yourself as some holy temple.
    Well I can fight fire with fire; I can defeat your rueful fouls.
    Iíll even make sure no one hears your tortured howls!
    Give me a hammer Iíll show you the nails.
    Your theory of being god like is about to fail.
    The cross will be simple and flesh can be torn.
    This will be more gruesome then children of the corn.
    Now sit very still and await your fate.
    Itís time you felt the sting of my hate.




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