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    dots Submission Name: WWJD?/The Second Comingdots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 560
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    Bytes: 1618



    Description:
       Jesus finds love on earth. sublime influenced second stanza with song "get ready"


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    dotsWWJD?/The Second Comingdots
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    Girl, you know that i'd die for you
    Cause you know I already did (I did)
    Don't leave me hangin' like last time, girl,
    If you need someone to answer your prayers... (I would)
    I hear ya cryin' and whisperin'
    Sweet nothing's into my ear again,
    Girl, the way that you make me feel...
    You (make) believe that I'm real...

    I would really like to be the one to take you there,
    I would really like hold you eternally,
    I would really like to be the one to take you there,
    I would really like to be the one to believe.

    I'm in the mood, get ready/are you ready?
    I'm in the mood, come on now, yeah...

    I saw you walking up to the stage,
    You need evangelical, sexual healing girl,
    You fell to the floor, you realized you felt my presence,
    Now do you believe that I'm real? (cause I would!)
    Wait until my second coming, girl,
    I'll come, to take you away from here,
    If I told you our love would rock the world,
    Would you want me to tear it all down, (Cause you know that I would)

    I would really like to be the one to take you there,
    I would really like hold you eternally,
    I would really like to be the one to take you there,
    I would really like to be the one to believe.

    (ad libs)
    (You're comin' with me, OH OH OHHHH,
    I'm not making you come,
    You're comin on your own free will,
    You and me,
    Eternally.)




    Submitted on 2009-04-01 16:01:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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