Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Obsessiondots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 481
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 591



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsObsessiondots
    -------------------------------------------


    You look around and you soon see
    That there is something for you.
    It stands there still, alone and free,
    And you find it, taking it near.

    You love this thing, the one that you love,
    And you can't get away from it.
    It eats away, with you thinking it from above,
    At your soul, your mind, your care.

    You stare and watch it, through all ends,
    And shift away from all you forgot.
    The people you loved, family and friends,
    And you have died around you.

    It's obsession's end.




    Submitted on 2009-04-01 19:51:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    172813

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    winners circle written by ShyOne
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    a mood to be free written by Daniel Barlow
    Every..... written by jackz
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Where? written by ParanoidParadox
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    no words for how graceful you are in this moment written by Daniel Barlow
    prison written by ShyOne
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Carry written by saartha
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    AI written by poetotoe
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Records I written by Raphael
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    a safe place written by Daniel Barlow
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Formal Jen written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry