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    dots Submission Name: How Different?dots
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    Author: 9isra4
    ASL Info:    14/Male/Houston
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Serious
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    dotsHow Different?dots
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    How different would the world be
    If everyone was at peace
    We could all get along
    If we could all just hit one great big bong
    How different would the world be
    If we could all just smoke a doobie
    So everyone can be happy
    How different would the world be
    If we could all just smoke some weed
    A lighter and some papers is all you need
    So come, and enjoy this joint with me




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