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    dots Submission Name: tonightdots
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    Author: joy7542
    Elite Ratio:    5.03 - 1034/952/203
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotstonightdots
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    The sheets are restless
    around my feet.
    my pillow has taken all the frustration
    of not knowing where to go
    and still,

    I can stand, I can take
    all the hurt
    I'll be broken later

    tonight.

    words rake across my skin,
    my head is beating with reasons...
    tears don't grace my face
    I don't want you
    to see,

    because I can stand, I can take
    all the hurt
    and I’ll be broken later

    so you won't see tonight.

    my sanity is wavering in the stillness,
    my heart is standing on shifting ground...
    the world turns me upside down
    and all I can do is fall...

    I can't stand, I can't take
    another hurt,
    it's too late

    tonight.

    the stars go on forever,
    shadows wrap the moon in imperfection
    it's cold tonight,
    it's hard tonight...

    but I’ll keep standing; I'll take a little more
    heartache,
    because being broken

    is all I have tonight.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm shattered
    but I'm fine, really
    I've learned to varnish scars
    and create beautiful antiques

    I must be lovely
    because I ache
    with sleek vibrancy
    a wistful angel
    on an awkward sea
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]



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