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    dots Submission Name: Wrathdots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWrathdots
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    Rage flows within
    Because of wrong done.
    Hatred fuels its lust
    For battles lost, not won.

    It ebbs and flows,
    Courses through the viens.
    The mind puses it farther,
    It no longer has reins.

    Vengence is done,
    You are now free,
    Or at least that's what you think,
    But remorse will stay with thee.

    You are forever cursed,
    Again you will never be,
    With chains and shackles it will bind you,
    Regret binds you, ne'er again to be free.

    It's wrath's end.




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      hi, its about time. poe
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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