Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: When You Get Close To Me dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.51 - 904/475/311
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 569
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1044



    Description:
       Here I go again writing a song to the love of my life.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsWhen You Get Close To Me dots
    -------------------------------------------


    (chorus)
    you-oo-oo-oo-oo-u
    roll me over, roll me over,
    everytime you say I love you-oo-oo-ooo-u.
    Baby, you roll me over
    everytime I'm with you-oo-oo-oo-u.
    (verse)
    Your voice, your walk, the way you talk
    is the right kind of pillow talk.
    Your lips, so sweet, your choice of color,neat,
    is the right kind of treat
    that rolls me over, rolls me over,
    when you get close to me.
    (chorus)

    (verse)
    Your swiggle,your wiggle, the way you jiggle,
    leaves me no room to fanaggle
    since you drive me crazy the way you giggle
    when your and my lips touch and sizzle,
    that's all it takes. You roll me over.
    (chorus)

    (verse)
    oo-oo-oo-oo--oo, la,la,lah,lah,ah,
    baby, you roll me over,
    roll me over, roll me over
    everytime I'm with you-oo-oo-oo-u,
    everytime I get close to you.
    (chorus)




    Submitted on 2009-04-01 23:46:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      a melody poem , joyous emotions , simple with a sweet blend , it has a love interest , great poem
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    172821

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Linger written by saartha
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    To written by SavedDragon
    Bond written by saartha
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Push written by JanePlane
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    This written by Chelebel
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry