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    dots Submission Name: Motel Lonelydots

    Author: Toosha
    ASL Info:    18/f/SD
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 20/13/11
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsMotel Lonelydots

    No one has stayed there for more than one night
    Not for years
    Yes, visitors come for a short while
    Then, leave
    Why won't anyone stay?
    More advertisements need to be put out
    Less clothes
    More makeup
    Her body is like a Motel
    Every night that a visitor arrives
    She hopes

    But not tonight
    He's gone before she could even catch his name
    She sits alone, crying once more
    Her life is now starting to fall into a routine
    She goes to the mirror, seeking help
    To tell her the flaws and mistakes she owns
    She stares into the mirror, gazing into those big, blue, once gorgeous eyes,
    Now vacant

    Looks like no one's home
    She lost herself looking for someone
    Looking for herself
    She lost herself
    And she doesn't know how far off she has ran.

    Submitted on 2009-04-02 11:36:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very mystic , good imagination , keeps you puzzling , bringing a whole new chapter about staying at a motel, keep writing , who is this lady at the motel?
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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