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    dots Submission Name: Hateddots
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    Author: SamiScream
    ASL Info:    16/F/SD
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 17/14/11
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 656
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsHateddots
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    Hate.
    Hate is a strong word.
    But itís what I feel.
    Everyday.
    You hate me.
    They hate me.
    Only because
    Iím different.
    At this school,
    I have no friends.
    Emo is what they say.
    They judged me,
    From the every seconded
    They saw me.
    It hurts to be alone.
    I hate being lonely.
    I have friends, but
    They live far away.
    And now I sit here in agony.
    Crying because Iím hated.




    Submitted on 2009-04-02 12:52:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
       It is very depressing.I LOVED IT! I like the style of your writting and I think you should post more !
    | Posted on 2009-04-20 00:00:00 | by rosealiehale | [ Reply to This ]
      sry tht u feel tht way to, but hey some of the greatest poems come out of stories like that. And that poem was really good.
    | Posted on 2009-04-03 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]
      awww, I'm sorry if you feel that way.
    Sucks.
    Very good poem though
    Keep it up
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by Toosha | [ Reply to This ]


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