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Author: SamiScream
ASL Info:    16/F/SD
Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 17 /14 /11
Words: 74
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
Total Views: 1068
Average Vote:    4.5000
Bytes: 511



Hate is a strong word.
But it’s what I feel.
You hate me.
They hate me.
Only because
I’m different.
At this school,
I have no friends.
Emo is what they say.
They judged me,
From the every seconded
They saw me.
It hurts to be alone.
I hate being lonely.
I have friends, but
They live far away.
And now I sit here in agony.
Crying because I’m hated.

Submitted on 2009-04-02 12:52:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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   It is very depressing.I LOVED IT! I like the style of your writting and I think you should post more !
| Posted on 2009-04-20 00:00:00 | by rosealiehale | [ Reply to This ]
  sry tht u feel tht way to, but hey some of the greatest poems come out of stories like that. And that poem was really good.
| Posted on 2009-04-03 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]
  awww, I'm sorry if you feel that way.
Very good poem though
Keep it up
| Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by Toosha | [ Reply to This ]

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