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Why'd you leave?


Author: SamiScream
ASL Info:    16/F/SD
Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 17 /14 /11
Words: 61
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Why'd you leave?



Why?
Why’d you have to leave.
I loved you.
Even though I barely
Knew you.
You were in my life
For two years.
Then you just leave.
Please tell me why.
Is it because you
Didn’t love me?
Everytime I think
About you, I cry.
You’ve been gone for
Almost 14 years.
Daddy, why’d you
Leave me?




Submitted on 2009-04-02 13:15:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  very emotional , hurt and anger , crying out for answers , showing true feelings , knowing the pain of being abandon , great poem , i hope things get better for you
| Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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