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    dots Submission Name: Songs of Virtuedots
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    Author: Sonson888
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 6/25/48
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsSongs of Virtuedots
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    ~~~~~Memory~~~~~~~~~~
    There is no great desire of hate
    That tear down Memory
    One might as well discover fire
    In residence of Sea
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ~~~~Loyalty~~~~~~~~
    So many broke into the House
    That Loyalty has made
    As Honesty brings down a thief
    So Judas- He- today.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ~~~~~Heart~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Though Passion with no stone is tied
    And pebbles have no hearts
    The Heart can render sensual feel
    And turn itself to Quartz
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ~~~~~~~~Love~~~~~~~~~~~
    No Greedyness can ever take
    The Love- that you gave me
    I'll guard the castle- safely locked
    And swallow the lone key.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ~~~~~~~Immortality~~~~~
    Perhaps the only transcience be
    Our dwindling physique
    No other sign- no other clue!
    Of Immortality
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    ~~~~Intelligence~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Knowledge is to Humans
    As pollen to the Bee,
    As Beggar's want of Victuals;
    Our most essential Need!




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