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    dots Submission Name: Smile, just smile!dots
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    Author: all2rest
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 30/40/34
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 482
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       It's unorganized, it's ugly, it's imperfect but hey the message is still there.....enjoy :)


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    dotsSmile, just smile!dots
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    Someone once asked me how I can keep smiling

    "How do you do it" She asked "are you on drugs?" Such a response is not surprising

    Most people can't believe that I see more than they see.

    That I look at the world through a heart that dreams dreams

    I believe in a God who's closer to me than any one person, than any living thing.

    They don't realize we have the power to choose between love and hate between good and bad news, or acceptance and debate.

    We can control our emotions by controlling our thoughts We can control our thoughts if we know what we want.

    Do you really want joy and peace to just flow?
    Then keep anger from your heart and learn to let go.

    Do you want love and happiness to be in it's place? Then cast out your pride and live with some grace.

    Life isn't easy, we know this for sure. It's hard to stay positive when it seems there's no cure.

    Struggle is upon us whichever way we go, but the question still stands:

    Which path will cause you to grow?




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      One thing that I have some to learn is (I think that this is on the bible or at least the concept has been go over, I remember Paul saying something like it) that Christians cannot appreciate Christian things. They don't get it you see. I know for a fact that Paul talks about us having Christ in us and that we have "the aroma of life" to those who are alive, to people that are saved. But to others, those who are perishing, we have "the aroma of death" they can stand us! We stink, because they feel condemned in the presents of someone who has Christ living in them! Some of this is in 1Corinthians, it's a good book check it out lol

    Wow that wasn't really a critique, but I do think that the poem has it's own cute quirkiness to it. It shows character even though it was unorganized. lol

    Keep Writing
    istalkmurdoch
    | Posted on 2010-05-27 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]
      Sometimes people ask me the same thing ,and I tell them different things.But I love God and know he is ther and that he is a God that loves me.And My husband loves God too...

    Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem,
    totojane

    you are a gift, an a inspriation!~
    | Posted on 2009-08-22 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]


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