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Flavor of Addiction

Author: Toosha
ASL Info:    18/f/SD
Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 20 /13 /11
Words: 87
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Average Vote:    3.0000
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Flavor of Addiction

Warmth around me
Only when you're near
Without you, I fear
I will no longer continue to be

Heart beat quickens
My everything within your fingers
Laying down, my body lingers
When you're away, my body sickens

Head full of cloud
when I take in your sweet flavor
Each moment with you I forever savor
Makes me proud

I tell you good-bye
You depart with an uproar
Leaving my whole being sore
At this time, I sit and cry
Wishing to die

Submitted on 2009-04-03 02:44:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like it alot. I love how you incourparate(sp?) your feelings in the poem.Your very talented and You should def. write more.The ending was my favorite.
| Posted on 2009-04-29 00:00:00 | by rosealiehale | [ Reply to This ]
  i like it i really do
you know you should put just a lil
more of YOUR feelings in it
it's you but make it MORE you
if you get what i mean
i aint trying to be a [censored]
i aint so yeah it is good
just a lil more you though
loves Dommy
| Posted on 2009-04-21 00:00:00 | by Rubesangel | [ Reply to This ]
  Hm. I kind of like it. It's not really what I'm used to reading, and seems a bit cliché. Haha. My poems are always really, really cliché. However, I like the message of the poem and you do an excellent job conveying your emotions in this piece. It's an interesting take.

Thanks for the write. <3

| Posted on 2009-04-04 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
  That was a really interesting poem. Umm not rlly sure what to say about. Don't get me wrong, it was good, but it was also very interesting.
| Posted on 2009-04-03 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]

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