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    dots Submission Name: 24 hoursdots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    18/F/On A Carousel
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 440/401/163
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 66
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 602



    Description:
       Yesterday was his day off.
    We went out to play a game of pool and figure out what we wanted to do that night.
    We ended up playing lots of games of pool.
    And fighting.
    Again.


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    Just 24 hours in the ocean.
    The waves wash all my plans out to sea.
    Where they ferment, mold on the lifeboat.

    I bend over the pool table,
    Lining my sights just so,
    and about half the time I make it.
    He aims and aligns,
    with beer on his breath.
    Shoot.
    Another ball into the ocean.

    I imagine it's tiring.
    Being so condenscending.
    All the time.
    With all the littlest things.
    And all the biggest words.

    Just 24 hours in the ocean.
    And he's trying to drown me.




    Submitted on 2009-04-03 10:03:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      my favorite line:
    "i imagine it's tiring
    being so condescending."

    your work is flawless.

    so are you.

    mermaids can't drown, my dear...

    when he throws you in the ocean
    just tell him,
    "oh noes...not the Briar Patch, Brer Fox!"
    | Posted on 2009-04-03 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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