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    dots Submission Name: One last thing before the darknessdots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    dotsOne last thing before the darknessdots
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    I have something to say,
    Just one more thing,
    If you will listen
    Once more stay.

    You shouldn't have fears,
    You'll find your way,
    Now please fight back
    Those sorrowful tears.
    Though darkness surrounds,
    Light always shines through,
    Always in each of us,
    Me and you.

    Let your light shine,
    Through the darkness break,
    Let sorrow never again linger
    When you see the sign.
    You then will be glad,
    All will be well,
    Never again to be
    Ina tormenting Hell or ever again sad.

    I thank you for staying,
    This one more time,
    I've given you the information,
    I would never false my saying.




    Submitted on 2009-04-03 10:29:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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