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    dots Submission Name: I Feel Itdots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI Feel Itdots
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    You sweep me off my feet,
    Make me feel incredible!
    You whisper in my ear,
    To tell me I am beautiful.

    Youíre part of me no matter what,
    Youíre in my heart and in my head,
    Youíre everything I never dreamed,
    Itís almost too good to be true.
    Almost!

    Iím so glad Iíve found you,
    So glad Iím a part of you!
    Iím so happy when Iím with you,
    And when Iím not I canít not think of you.

    They can try to tell me off,
    But Iím not going anywhere.
    They can try to change my mind,
    But itís set in stone.

    When I see your face, your smile,
    It brightens up my day!
    When you kiss and say my name,
    I feel like Iím alone with you,
    Even in a crowded room.

    Your arms around me tight and right,
    So close together all for one!
    Iím missing you when weíre apart,
    When I think of you I feel it in my heart!




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