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    dots Submission Name: Katharine’s Wheel ( September 1996 )dots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 288
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
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    dotsKatharine’s Wheel ( September 1996 )dots
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    Katharine’s Wheel ( September 1996 )

    No one should be asked
    To sit next to your lover
    Or have to hear
    How he longed to touch her

    No one should be asked
    To bare betrayal
    With a smile
    And be the calm within the rages
    Of those destroyed embraces

    No one should have to suffer
    Such loss
    Or be emptied
    In the puddles of your pride

    No one deserves
    To be taunted so
    To be left devastated
    By their loves
    Cold and cruel
    Heartless you

    Implacable you wasted
    All those sacrificial kisses
    Expecting even more
    Acceptance of mocking frigidity
    Ever unexpressed sham of sexuality

    No man should find himself
    Still waiting by your side
    While dieing in the tears
    Behind a mask of pain
    And be full of gentle smiles

    Ripped without a sound
    So you wouldn’t hear the sobbing
    That let you stay sleeping
    In the torture of the night

    No one should be so disrespected
    Made to feel so worthless
    “If you were successful I would love you” She said
    “I want more than just your love”

    No one should be so discarded
    Left alone with their broken leg
    While you ride the new black car
    Of your own ego’s self centred worship

    Belittled in your familiar judgement
    Your families’ contrivance of easy labels
    No one expects to be so shattered
    By someone they have loved
    Or merits such a breaking
    In the way you broke me

    Destroying me in the brow beating
    Echoes of your family
    Simply walked away
    And left me

    No one is worthy
    Of that

















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      RAW. there is a lot of well expressed raw emotion.

    i do like it indeed. every verse made me want to read the next. =]

    xxx
    | Posted on 2009-04-04 00:00:00 | by MysterydarkPoet | [ Reply to This ]


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