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    dots Submission Name: Paradox of Recognitiondots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 249
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsParadox of Recognitiondots

    Paradox of Recognition

    Unknown the impasse of a whisper
    She echoes stranger in the darkness
    Of her heart
    So alone in the glowing flicker
    The love she keeps alive there
    By fired dreams
    She longs to share

    Somewhere in the footsteps of the night
    A solitary lover wanders
    Lost and out of sight
    Sometimes he can hear
    The falling of quiet patient tears
    They keep his life bent on searching
    Has pursued now for so many years

    She feeds the ember-ed flames
    Still softly weeping
    They fall and map the shadows
    He is struggling to part
    In the penumbraís of his heart

    One day the tiny light she keeps
    Catches spark in a strangerís eye
    He finds himself on new ground walking
    Into a burning golden sunrise
    Sees her holding up a shinning lantern
    To guide his way
    To her

    Smiles bright a silvered morning
    Open in a skies blue waking eye
    Standing there before them
    The mirror of their lives

    There is a dance of lovers joining
    Washing, singing through their soul
    One to the other
    Their hearts are falling
    Into someone they have always known
    A paradox of recognition
    A secret their lips
    Have longed to divulge

    He kneels down beside her
    Echoes stranger in the darkness
    Of their heart
    One arm wrapped about her shoulder
    One word to say he promises
    To stay beside her forever
    And feed the fires
    Of those ever hungry flames

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