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    dots Submission Name: Sundaydots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 261
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    What a quaint and small conception you have of the world



    while you are polishing your rhetoric in pews
    with the silver laden coffers of your charity
    tucked neatly into your wallet


    A bright angel of hymns goes dancing through grave yards
    where you have lain all heavens in death
    and spent life mourning the passing of a cloud
    when the shadow it cast
    was the hand of God


    In pealing bells crosses the un-open fields of ideals
    Sunday, brings to its alter of blessed wine
    the mockery of blood
    sweet sugar Sunday, coated, painted, white
    and powder puff heresy

    Sunday, a Ploughmans Lunch of righteousness
    and self confessed aggrandizement
    a roast beef deliberation of the eternal joke
    has you kissing the priest feet
    instead of the sun


    Sunday; the candy cotton collected plethora's of worship
    forgives the villain and felon with confession
    and still breaks its bread on the table of the starving
    virtuous bloody Sunday
    beating at wrist with Roman nails
    wearing its tears in a crown of thorns
    and sumptuous retires in a fat kissed bangle

    Sunday; the barricade of belief
    that knowingly knows no one should work
    while the vultures are picking at societies bones
    and the Papal sacrament makes you homeless
    on the bleached and baking wastelands of Earth

    This is Sunday
    in all its finery of dripping candels
    and out of tune hymns
    stained glasses of faith
    and broken bent knees


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