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    dots Submission Name: The Very Green Frog and The “Odd” Bog Dogdots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsThe Very Green Frog and The “Odd” Bog Dogdots
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    The Very Green Frog and The “Odd” Bog Dog

    As told by “The Redoubtable Marmaduke” the fog bog jogging hog


    The odd bog dog
    Was known as such
    Because he lived on a log
    By a bog
    And everyone thought that was very odd

    Now; the odd bog dog who lived on a log
    By a bog
    Was very fond of spending time
    With his friend the very green frog
    And everyone agreed
    What a strange thing indeed
    To see the very green frog and the odd bog dog
    Sitting at night on the odd bog dogs log
    By a bog

    Hog !

    Who said Hog ?

    No its

    L O G

    The odd bog dog lives on a LOG

    Not a HOG

    To think of seeing a very green frog and an odd bog dog
    Sitting at night on a very bored hog
    Would be more than enough to make your eyes go pop
    But I am told that there was a hog
    Who loved to jog
    Round and round the edge of the bog
    The very same bog of the odd bog dog
    The very same friend of the very green frog
    Who used to spend their nights
    Sitting on the log of the odd bog dog
    By a bog

    But that’s another story

    A story of hogs that love to jog in the fog
    Round and round the edges of bogs
    And the only thing I can say of hogs
    Is this particular bog jogging hog
    Was called The Redoubtable Marmaduke
    And he was famous for hog jogging the bogs of the world
    Especially in the fog

    But that’s another story

    Now; one night it was when the very green frog
    Jumped from the log of the odd bog dog
    And landed in the bog with a very loud plop
    That made the odd bog dogs eyes go bob, bob, bob
    Until he thought they wouldn’t stop
    It’s a hop, hop hopping night cried the very green frog
    And hopped back onto the odd bog dogs log
    Then hopped off and on and off and on and off
    The odd bog dogs log
    By a bog
    And each time landing in the bog with a very loud plop
    That sent the odd bog dogs eyes going bob, bob, bob
    Till he thought they wouldn’t stop
    While the very green frog went laughing with a blurp, blurp, blurp

    That looks like fun thought the odd bog dog
    So he gathered himself up on his log by a bog
    And gave a mighty hop just like the very green frog
    And landed with a loud furry wet splashy plop
    That made the very green frog laugh out loud with a blurp, blurp, blurp

    Very green frogs and odd bog dogs hopping off of a log
    By a bog
    Said The Redoubtable Marmaduke the fog bog jogging hog
    He had to smile at their very loud plops
    And the very green frog going blurp. blurp, blurp
    As he sniffed the air waiting for fog
    A night for hops and plops for very green frogs and odd bog dogs
    But the bog jogging hog
    Sat patiently waiting for the fog
    He loved to jog round and round the edges of bogs
    Especially in the fog

    But that’s another story




















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      Though very well entertained by your story of the very green frog and the odd bog dog i find myself eagerly anticipating the tale of Redoubtable marmaduke and his intense jog in the foggy odd bog

    will marmaduke try to jump on the log?
    how will the odd bog dog react to a famous bog jogging hog choosing his bog to jog round in the fog?
    will the hop hop hopping of the very green frog interrupt the famous hogs bog jogging?

    great job this was fun to read and will most likely be stuck in my head for days
    | Posted on 2009-04-17 00:00:00 | by Patricio | [ Reply to This ]


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