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Scrapped, like everything Ive wrote

Author: MyWorld
ASL Info:    21/M/IN
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I just trashed this. I'm not progressing it anymore. I will revise, try to make it flow better. But, I don't care enough about the feeling, anymore. Fuck 'em.

Scrapped, like everything Ive wrote

Your maniacal ass ought to know, the suicidal thoughts you brought to her won't
Be the reason for her leavin in a bloodstained evenin'
You sustained your heatheness in what must've alleviated
You from the pain of your own inadequacies
If you wanna be mad at me, I'd rather be
Not your friend, then for you to've brought her end
And, yeah, I think it's sad to see you not acknowledge such a catastrophe
But, sayin, your just playin it back at me is blasphemy
You're attackin' me in a dastardly way
Tragically, the way it has to be, but, that's okay
Because, I'm used to bein' the bigger man
You're confusin' me with what you've been
It ain't backstabbin' I'm after, but, a deviation from the disasterly
That ain't the path for me, I'm happily after what I have for me
I don't need no fraudulent friends causin' problems callin themselves king
But, I got em.
I'll demolish your following wallowing in the problems your causin me
At least I'm not them

But, if you wanna run your mouth, get your story straight
Cause, I'm comin' undone and I'm gonna run somethin' blunt into your face
You're chasin a pace ya can't match
In this race, it's a waste, if ya can't get past
Yourself, your mind, you find this hell inside yourself
An' try to unleash it unto me
I've begun to see, you're done with being
Anything, if any ever dare to bring
Themself to my level, I'll level 'em
If ever I'm to sever 'em, I'll forever damn myself to hell with 'em
I embellish 'em with revelling perspectives
Forever, myself, I'll respect it's
All we've got in this world
And you're lost in this whirlpool
Causing yourself caustic thoughts which rule

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