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    dots Submission Name: THE GOODdots
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    Author: drmahendra
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTHE GOODdots
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    THE GOOD
    [MAHENDRA BHATNAGAR]
    .


    The feeling of love and affection
    Alone
    Is the best choice in the creation!
    The feeling of love and affection
    Of man
    In the world of men
    In the all human society!
    .

    Let the entire compassion
    Of man remain
    Amidst all living beings!
    It alone
    Is the great best worship!
    .

    Let every man
    of the world
    Indulge
    Always / ceaselessly
    In this pure best worship!
    .

    Let only this desire,
    Simple, candid, innocent, guileless
    Spring
    In each and every man!

    




    Submitted on 2009-04-04 07:24:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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