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    dots Submission Name: In The Passion of Lovedots
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    Author: Darkest Flaw
    ASL Info:    21/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 206/284/104
    Words: 303
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       don't know. been in a funk lately. this is just a write kind of clearing my mind.


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    dotsIn The Passion of Lovedots
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    In the passion of "love" we know no mercy, no sympathy, only what our heart tells us. We cannot listen to the mind when there's emotions involved, we listen only to the blood flow inside our ears. And we smile when everything is wrong and frown when we can't find the words for what isn't right. We've said many things, secrets that only one another now know, dreams and asperations of futures set forth, and memories of all that we wish we could forget. We say we'll be there forever through the thick & the thin, but in all probability there will be a day when two paths bring a choice and we choose differently. There will be a time when each other’s name is just a thing of the past, we'll lose touch, we'll lose everything we've had in these "wonder years" the years when we're young and should be care free but instead we worry about tomorrow even though there's no promise of such a thing. We say "goodnight" to ourselves and "good morning" to the same, we walk along, a pawn in a game of trust and misfortune, we think we're different but the truth is; it's all been done before, nothing is original or new. We think the more we stand out the better and the more we blend in the worse - but in actuality it doesn't matter; there's no better, no worse, in fact there's not even a medium. There's just the notion that one person is better than another because of material belongings or even non material belongings. No one person is better or worse than another, no one person can change the world and yet we still wait for that one who can walk on water....




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      Loved it! It takes some people a life time to understand
    such wisdom. I'm still wondering how you wrote it at 20.

    Peace and Love,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2009-04-16 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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