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    dots Submission Name: Library of Lifedots

    Author: Draigon
    ASL Info:    25/m/Al
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 164/196/91
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsLibrary of Lifedots

    Everyone has their stories,
    a book of revelations,
    Depicting their lives,
    or a life left behind.
    Some lack a structure,
    some are written well.
    No matter how it is written,
    everyone has a book,
    A book that is locked inside of time.

    Some are filled with lies,
    some tell the truth.
    No one knows,
    until they open the book,
    and have a look inside.

    Everyone's memoir is different.
    Some leave behind a legacy,
    Other's tells just turn to dust,
    and the wind carries the ashes away.
    Even so; everyone has a story,
    a story behind the veil.

    Perhaps some have a future,
    some may not.
    But we all have stories,
    hidden behind the lock.

    Just open up someone's book,
    and see what lies beneath;
    Beneath the physical appearance.
    And under the make-up of all mankind.

    Submitted on 2009-04-04 19:31:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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