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    Author: Dragonslayer
    ASL Info:    22/M/MI
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 43/40/23
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    As the daylight enter's the final phase
    the world will remember that
    each of us have a certain
    destiny that each of us
    have to endure, no
    matter the
    outcome




    Submitted on 2009-04-04 21:30:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A thought provoking piece and very nicely layed out. I like that it left me to think of what type of destiny I would be enduring. Curious!

    Thank you,

    Kuuipo
    | Posted on 2009-04-04 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ]


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