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    dots Submission Name: Runningdots
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    Author: Texan_Poet
    ASL Info:    20/F/daydreaming
    Elite Ratio:    5.7 - 127/123/48
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
    Total Views: 433
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 473



    Description:
       Meh. I found a bunch of my older poems that I'v never showed to anyone, so I decided to post them. Those who read my work on a regular basis know what this is about, for everyone else... don't worry about it, it would freak you out.


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    dotsRunningdots
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    Nowhere to run
    Nowhere to hide,
    Trapped by this secret
    That I'v locked deep inside.
    Nothing can stop them,
    Nothing can beat them.
    They will always find you,
    No matter where you hide.
    So all I can do
    Is abandon hope,
    And try to run from the pain.
    But it kills me.
    Because the one I'm running from...
    ...Is you.




    Submitted on 2009-04-07 09:44:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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