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    dots Submission Name: The Raindots
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    Author: Texan_Poet
    ASL Info:    20/F/daydreaming
    Elite Ratio:    5.7 - 127/123/48
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 505
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 399



    Description:
       I love the rain, because I always feel like it purifies me as well as the Earth. Something I love to do is to dance in the rain, no matter what else is going on. This is (yet another) of my old poems that I came across that no one has ever read.


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    dotsThe Raindots
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    The rain washes away sadness
    To make way for happiness.
    The rain floods out the rot
    To make way for new life.
    It batters hurt into the riverbeds,
    To make way for healing.

    But what's the point
    When lightning will just strike,
    Bringing it all back anew,
    Stronger now,
    From having been beaten down
    And come back?




    Submitted on 2009-04-07 10:02:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I also enjoy the rain, but I really have a deep love in me for storms, with lightning and slashing rain and, of course, thunder. Violent and yet beautiful at the same time.
    A fun one to read, but very short. :( I would've liked to see it lengthened, but maybe that would just kill the imagery.

    Slainte,

    DW
    | Posted on 2009-04-12 00:00:00 | by Shadowstar13 | [ Reply to This ]


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