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    dots Submission Name: Reachingdots

    Author: Texan_Poet
    ASL Info:    20/F/daydreaming
    Elite Ratio:    5.7 - 127/123/48
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 585
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 263

       Shorter than most of mine, and not sure where it came from. An older piece I never submitted.

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    Sucess is here,
    It's now within your grasp,
    It's just around the bend,
    Just inside your reach.
    But Fate's claws, too, are reaching.
    So be wary that they could send you packing,
    With a loss to pave your way.

    Submitted on 2009-04-07 10:03:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      reflections very deep with emotions , thoughts going through adversity , well written poem
    | Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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