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    dots Submission Name: Colorful Lifedots
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    Author: Texan_Poet
    ASL Info:    20/F/daydreaming
    Elite Ratio:    5.7 - 127/123/48
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 406



    Description:
       Lady Rose the first time she discoverd the ubercrackformerlyknownasStarbucks. Lots of it. (^_^) Hahaha, this is totally nonsensical, and like only one of my other pieces (Birthday Kiss, wrote it on a comission) there is no deeper or hidden meaning to this. There is nothing wrong with purple hair, also, for those out there that might read this.


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    dotsColorful Lifedots
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    A blonde in blue,
    It's the perfect color on her anew,
    A brunette in black,
    She's on the right track,
    A carrot top in princess pink,
    About her life she needs to think,
    Ebony locks adorn her head?
    Doesn't even like to get out of bed.
    Of all the colors told here it's true,
    Think on this, at least it's not of purple hue!




    Submitted on 2009-04-07 10:15:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2009-05-04 00:00:00 | by lone_one | [ Reply to This ]
      brunett- brunette
    its- it's

    Hahaha, my forelock used to be dyed purple.
    I used to wonder why God gave us Starbucks xD Well now we know.
    Flow was rather jaunty and joyful. "Colorful" should be spelled as "Colorful"-sorry xD.
    Made me chuckle.

    Slainte,

    DW
    | Posted on 2009-04-12 00:00:00 | by Shadowstar13 | [ Reply to This ]


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