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Because it is Fake


Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 136
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Because it is Fake



I inch further away
But they just crawl faster.
I bow my head-
Obey my master.
I know better now.
Than to try and run and hide
They know me inside and out
And know exactly where to find.
Running not an option,
I just lay down, submit
pretend that i am someone else
And have gotten used to it.
What more of me
Is there to take?
Just take it all
Because it is fake.
Sweetheart, please exhale
I need to breathe your precious air
To take me someplace else
Make me not be there.
The wreck inside me
So starkingly bright-
My head cannot bear
One more internal fight.




Submitted on 2009-04-07 12:34:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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