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    dots Submission Name: Blurb 2 the Bacombistsdots
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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 60/131/105
    Words: 340
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
    Total Views: 780
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    Bytes: 1959



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       Blurb number 2. Questions, comments? I want feedback please. I could also use it for the first one http://www.eliteskills.com/z/172736 As well.


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    dotsBlurb 2 the Bacombistsdots
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    "Why can't we help them, sir!?" Ono-Kono asked frantically.
    "Settle down my student, it will happen soon enough." As they continued to watch the battle a dark being snuck into the room. He was 6'1, wearing all black, and his face was filled with piercings. He was the general of the Oil army coming after Nog-Koo and Ono-Kono because of their religious rivalry. Nog-Koo quickly ignited his glowing sword-arm and got into a stance. His left arm glew a dark green. Ono-Kono followed igniting his right arm a light blue.
    "If you've come to finish us off, you're going to be dissapointed!" Nog-Koo said unable to see where Shag-Mur was.
    "Heh, that intuition never fails to surprise me!" The dark general said with a deep voice.
    "Well, there are two of us left, but only one of you!"
    "Yeah, but who can fight better?" Shag-Mur replied igniting both his arms a dark blood red revealing himself to the left of where Nog-Koo and Ono-Kono were facing. He then jumped high into the air with his arms extended forward and he landed in the middle of the two as they blocked his arms with each of their ignited arms and then kicked him back. As he fell back he bounced off of the wall with his arms extended and flew at them. Ono-Kono ducked and Nog-Koo moved to the side, slashing at his leg but missed knicking his cloak. Shag-Mur then started spinning around with his arms fully extended. Shag-Mur was stopped by both Bacombists and he stared out the window watching his men retreat.
    "This isn't over, Bacombists, I will have my way!" He said as he disapeared.
    "Damn Bacomnist abilities, they can almost do anything!" Nog-Koo said as he watched the battle end in victory for him and his cause. The remainder of his troops all walked back into the building and he was very happy.




    Submitted on 2009-04-07 18:19:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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