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    dots Submission Name: What I mean when I saydots
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    Author: wanderingpoet16
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    dotsWhat I mean when I saydots
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    A small bird settled
    on an oak limb


    Wind tore leaves from the gallant oak
    but her frail feet managed to grasp the branch

    Gazing over familiar ground,
    she gathered her thoughts and said,

    "I can fly and have flown
    freely

    Such is the life of a life with wings.

    I have sang my repetoire
    in many gardens
    and been loved by those who would


    but I love this old oak
    in the quiet yard of the brick house



    I have been loved more here
    than anywhere





    so i'll always return."




    Submitted on 2009-04-07 19:15:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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