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    dots Submission Name: Wondering, wondering, forever awaydots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWondering, wondering, forever awaydots
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    Go away to that special place,
    Where it's not life, no big race.
    There's something there, just for you
    Without you there, it's quite blue.

    But stay not long or you'll be lost,
    Or stuck there, you'll be, and with great cost.
    It's good to visit, not to stay,
    Wondering, wondering, forever away

    If you leave, all will be well,
    There will be no ill for you, no tormenting hell.
    If you stay, though, soon you'll see,
    That, in life again, you will never be.

    That's it, enough, your visit is done
    Aren't you glad that you've had your fun?
    Now I ask you to make visits brief and not to stay
    Wondering, wondering forever away.




    Submitted on 2009-04-07 19:43:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      But stay not long or you'll be lost,
    Or stuck there, you'll be, and with great cost.
    would flow better if it was
    "But stay not long or you'll be lost,
    Or you'll be stuck, and with great cost."

    the rythym is very off.
    | Posted on 2009-05-06 00:00:00 | by die_another_day | [ Reply to This ]


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