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    dots Submission Name: The King Who Thought Himself Supremedots

    Author: Sonson888
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 6/25/48
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsThe King Who Thought Himself Supremedots

    The King who thought himself supreme
    Was just as much as me;
    The vagabond who eats off scraps
    Is nothing more than he;

    The glorious priest who's self- "divine"
    Has sinned as much as you;
    The Romans share no lesser blame
    Than Judas- or the Jew;

    The Hummingbird has no more state
    Of flowers- than the Bee;
    But all the while we all compete
    And miss Equality!

    Submitted on 2009-04-07 20:35:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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