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    dots Submission Name: Minimum Wagedots
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    Author: ssssss
    Elite Ratio:    4.53 - 32/30/35
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMinimum Wagedots
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    My low status has fallen,
    I'm back at the bottom
    feeding on the scraps of society.

    Slaving as a number
    punched on a button.
    My name, a tag to make me seen.

    I am nothing,
    only one of many
    in this place of drudgery.

    I could lose this too
    and rest in a ditch
    where the sewer waters run through me.




    Submitted on 2009-04-07 22:58:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      haha i like this. made a laugh a little at the morbidity. But I completely understand. Working at minimum wage in some low-end job is a b****. Typo at the end of the third stanza but yea good job overall :) I think you could expand some of the imagery you used to make the pice stronger, like the sewer or the nametag. But thats all I have to say. Good job.
    -Randee
    | Posted on 2009-04-08 00:00:00 | by UnderlinedInRed | [ Reply to This ]



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