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Is There Any Point?


Author: Whatamidoing
ASL Info:    14 f scotland
Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 2 /3 /6
Words: 53
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
Total Views: 1435
Average Vote:    5.0000
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Is There Any Point?


Is there any point in:
Working,
Trying,
Thinking,
Loving,
Living?
When all we get is crap back!

Is there any point in:
Laughing,
Crying,
Feeling,
Believing,
Living?
When everybody eventually dies!

What is the point?
When everyone youlove dies,
When you get hurt
By everyone.
Is there any poin in living?




Submitted on 2009-04-08 05:32:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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