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If I Close my Eyes


Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 53
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 669
Average Vote:    5.0000
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If I Close my Eyes



The night is quiet,
my mind is free
What is it that
I should be?
Obscenity
Identity.
Sore and raw,
Broken and battered,
Nearly all that loved
Shorn to nothing but tatters.
Inconseqential
Matters.
The operating table,
Cut open, Bare.
If i close my eyes
I am not there....
Anymore
I don't care.




Submitted on 2009-04-08 12:00:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like it. In the forth from last line, you forgot to capitalize the "I". Not like it's some big error but yeah. I like it.
| Posted on 2009-04-08 00:00:00 | by Midorininja | [ Reply to This ]


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