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    dots Submission Name: Freedots
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    Author: cor
    ASL Info:    16/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 28/24/30
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFreedots
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    People are easily tainted
    People are easily turned
    they try to control
    they try to overpower
    only fools try no matter what
    only fools try to never accept loss

    they've Caused oppression
    they've caused confession
    they make you feel worthless
    they make you think its fruitless
    like your unable to think
    like your unable to still sink

    Don't listen to them though!
    They aren't your only foe!
    If you don't believe it all
    You can still stand tall
    don't let them get you down
    they don't wear your life's crown

    you have a choice
    You have a voice

    You can be Alive
    you can survive

    You can resist
    you can persist

    They can't destroy your spirit if you don't let them
    They cant force you to bend to their will

    gather those around you
    rally them all for the coup
    Storm them in the night
    Start with them the fight
    let them know as you stand in the door
    let them know who to reckon with no more

    Finally you are all free
    now you at last can see

    That unfortunately the world is little better
    But at least you now know you are in charge
    You can do what you want with your life
    Now you can finally understand.




    Submitted on 2009-04-08 13:16:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very intriging. Once I started reading it, I couldnt stop. Theme is so true. Good Job with this piece and keep on writing :D
    | Posted on 2009-04-08 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]


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