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    dots Submission Name: Roger Rogerdots
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    Author: Namlooc20
    ASL Info:    26/Male/Spokane, WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 359/327/107
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 573
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1275



    Description:
       Romeo is Dead, my solo project.


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    dotsRoger Rogerdots
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    Now.
    Roger Roger here I go
    falling faster than I know
    Stay afloat we'll be alright,
    Yeah hold my hand we'll be just
    (Yeah) Roger Roger here I go
    Walking on for nothing so
    Here I am and here I'll stay
    looking for my brand new

    Day
    Ay-ay
    Day-ay-ay

    Hold my hand and don't you
    Leave without me won't you
    please just wait for me
    I'll show you what I see
    and
    It's okay I promise
    Your broken heart means nothin'
    listen to my words
    I wrote them for you!

    Roger Roger here I go
    falling faster than I know
    Stay afloat we'll be alright,
    Yeah hold my hand we'll be just
    Roger Roger here I go
    falling faster than I know
    Stay afloat we'll be alright,
    Yeah hold my hand we'll be just

    Day-ay
    Day-ay
    Day-ay
    Wait.
    (It'll be okay
    It'll be just fine
    I'll help you get through this
    If you help with mine.)x2

    It'll be okay
    It'll be just fine
    I'll help myself
    To leave you behind.




    Submitted on 2009-04-08 22:03:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I wish this had music to it. it was awsome! Such a catchy tune! I can't such much more though becuase I don't know a whole lot about writing music, so I hope some one who does gives you the deserving comments you need
    | Posted on 2009-07-26 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]


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