Description: Definately not one of my best works. However, I think it worthy of review all the same. Advice and critisim welcome.
A note on the personal. The relationship between myself and this girl has progressed dramaticly since I wrote this poem. Some of these questions have been answered and a fairly open communative relationship has been established between us. However...some of these questions remain.
Have you an interest in me after all?
Still just a friend, or do I have a chance?
I now have your number, but should I call?
What are the right steps to take in this dance?
After a confession of affection
Can a truely healthy close friendship form?
questions answered with truth or deflection?
Will I be greeted with warmth or a storm?
When you said you wanted me as a friend
should I be able by intuition
to know you've chosen him, to my hope's end,
or that I must win with competition?
Do I court you and with romance proceed?
To earn your heart is my love's want and need.