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    dots Submission Name: perceptive witnessdots
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    Author: nomad knight
    Elite Ratio:    6.66 - 110/75/41
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Recieving expressions sent into the void
    Poetry of a girl in quiet pain and distress
    Though I be concerned rather than annoyed
    Confessions of misery aren't always an S.O.S.
    Reading hidden sighns of what lies beneath
    Her forced smiles shown false in her weary eyes
    Watching out for a dagger out of sheath
    Her bleeding wounds covered with desperate lies
    Compelled to protect, as is my fashion
    I long to help her, dry her tearful face
    Though motivated by by my compassion
    I know i'm not to act, It's not my place
    So I'll watch her with concern from afar
    Ready, should she ever show me her scars




    Submitted on 2009-04-09 07:30:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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