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    dots Submission Name: Notes of a New Notebookdots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    17/Female/TMON
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 112/217/289
    Words: 264
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 402
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    Description:
       Comparisions between old and new notebooks


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    dotsNotes of a New Notebookdots
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    A Crisp clean notebook
    Is a new start at life
    A chance to change
    To work harder
    To live happier
    The beauty of the choices
    Overwhelms ones mind
    And the Possibilities are
    Endless


    I see you
    We look the same
    But we are different
    From the outside
    We are vaguely identical
    You are worn from use
    I am new
    Otherwise we both hold tattoos
    Scars from graffiti
    It suits us, we are loved
    To open you , I am searching your insides
    The first feeling I sense is pain
    You are overworked, overtired
    You are kept along
    Only to find true meaning before death
    I look down at myself
    Examining my insides in relation to yours
    I see blank pages
    So white they are almost blinding
    They hold opportunity
    Symbolize a beginning
    One day I will find myself
    Old, loved, and overused
    I can only hope to be as great as you
    Someday along the road

    Iíve Already made it much farther
    Iím in Ohio, where did you go, to school?

    Iím writing more meaningful things
    Than homework, drawings and pain.

    Sorry to have surpassed you already
    You where my inspiration to get this far.


    Even to make menacing scribbles
    Across these pages
    Wouldnít dull their beautiful cleanliness
    It scares ma a bit
    Iím afraid to dirty them
    But not to scared to write
    Nothing could stop me
    From Writing
    It is my life

    But with pages bent and ruffled,
    You lose some of your innocence
    And I feel much more compelled
    To Write





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