Wave Goodbye (Haiku) by Mud

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Submission Name: Wave Goodbye (Haiku) dots

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Author:	Mud
ASL Info:	18/f/India
Elite Ratio:	2.84 - 55/89/46
Words:	12

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	122
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	82

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Wave Goodbye (Haiku) dots

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the water sparkled
a blue wave coiled upwards
and swallowed the land

Submitted on 2009-04-09 14:15:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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mighty strong thoughts , straight forward, good oem
| Posted on 2009-04-09 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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