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I <3 Rainbows


Author: SamiScream
ASL Info:    16/F/SD
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Words: 23
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I <3 Rainbows


Purple, pink and blue
With some yellow
And green too.
Rainbows are pretty.
Rainbows are cool.
I love rainbows
and so do you!




Submitted on 2009-04-09 14:18:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  that was lame. sorry!
however, i like rainbows as well :)
try again, you have potential.
| Posted on 2009-04-09 00:00:00 | by berthabutt | [ Reply to This ]


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