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    dots Submission Name: She is... (Angel)dots
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    Author: Doublefeather
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 71/61/33
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsShe is... (Angel)dots
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    She is,
    The final destination,
    The best I can reach,
    The golden heart,
    For which I would give,
    All but my soul,
    She is finer than the finest gem,
    More beautiful than all of my poems,
    The heroine,
    The sword,
    The shield,
    The love,
    My angel.

    She is my inspirer,
    My strong arm,
    Friend,
    And close companion,
    The closer she is the better I feel,
    She completes,
    She inspires,
    She is worth leaving the world behind,
    She is my beautiful other,
    My sweet song,
    My angel.




    Submitted on 2009-04-09 19:47:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      love it
    | Posted on 2009-05-04 00:00:00 | by cha | [ Reply to This ]
      This seems to have been written at a time of great passion, and is inspiring. There are a lot of clichés in there that you might want to look out for, however.
    | Posted on 2009-05-01 00:00:00 | by The Conqueror | [ Reply to This ]
      to love is to worship i loved this i oculd almost see her
    | Posted on 2009-04-16 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]
      My love is my soul mate.



    Man you talk to much.
    | Posted on 2009-04-12 00:00:00 | by nsc | [ Reply to This ]


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