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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    Descriptions in a Leaf

    An ever expanding moment
    Deciphering equilibrium
    Encrypting chaos
    Convergence spilling outward
    Breathing indrawn gasp wave staccato’s
    The designs intricacies

    Pandemonium of links
    Events
    Patterns cast on scenic sentience
    Picks out the radiance atonement

    Perception floating
    Anchoring on that moment
    Refracts the clues resonance
    On an equal curve
    Spiralled inward
    In countless deliveries
    Of green
    Imparted memories

    Veined in the dissection
    Of atomic anatomy
    Splitting sun solar systems
    Initiating
    The retinal collisions
    Of sight defined edges
    Blades poised
    Suffuses viridian

    Hangs there connected

    Descriptions in a leaf








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