Dad

Author: blackdemigod13 Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 56 /60 /41 Words: 42

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Dad

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someone who loves you and is there someone who always cares it doesn't is you're related by blood all that matters is that you're loved so now i'll end this poem by saying you're the dad i got by praying

Submitted on 2009-04-10 20:39:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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@ Angel well was in my life I think we both know how that turned out lol

| Posted on 2012-08-24 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]

Aww I know who you're talking about. I'm glad he's in your life. Angel

| Posted on 2009-05-11 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]

I love my daughters. I love them for who they are.

| Posted on 2009-04-13 00:00:00 | by nsc | [ Reply to This ]

i think this is very sweet and its poetic without being lengthy

| Posted on 2009-04-11 00:00:00 | by divineevilness | [ Reply to This ]

very sentimental poem , heartfelt from very beginning , you put so much emotional trait, great poem , keep writing

| Posted on 2009-04-11 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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