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    dots Submission Name: I'm Really Missing Youdots
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    Author: all2rest
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 30/40/34
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       I ouldn't sleep so I thought, what the heck I'll write this


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    dotsI'm Really Missing Youdots
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    You came into my life like the southern winds blow
    and I've been swept away ever since It's been made known
    That you fit me just perfect like that last puzzle piece
    that one thinks they've lost when the pictures incomplete
    Only to find it in the very last place they looked
    It reminds me of a time I read an unfinished book
    A story so captivating only to never ever end
    You're just left hanging on your very last thread
    My hope dwells inside that I'll see you real soon
    And show you what real romance can do
    It's a bittersweet moment where I'm left wanting more
    Take me to that place where I don't know what's in store
    It's just the kind of feeling one has to get through
    Baby I'm saying I'm really missing you




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      very really Great great great good nice nice nice awesome I really liked it imagery flow very deep lots of emotions good job keep it up, keep writing.
    | Posted on 2009-04-12 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]


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