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    dots Submission Name: The Best Partdots
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    Author: einna
    ASL Info:    23/F
    Elite Ratio:    5.44 - 11/13/14
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 604
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 460



    Description:
       I miss my boyfriend...


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    dotsThe Best Partdots
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    Everyday I wake up
    and go to class again.
    Sit alone in a crowded room,
    To a teacher teaching something new...
    I come home to watch the clock,
    To count down the time.
    Just a moment more,
    To finally reach
    The best part
    With you.
    I can not wait until that day,
    When I need not wait any more.
    Where I come home,
    I close the door,
    To turn around to see you.




    Submitted on 2009-04-12 19:03:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      that was a cute little poem about that 'i just cant wait to see my fella again' feeling
    i enjoyed the read as well as your few others that i checked out, i give many kudos
    also, thank you for the comment on my one poem, it is very much appreciated
    have a lovely day
    peace
    ren
    | Posted on 2009-11-30 00:00:00 | by Renada | [ Reply to This ]


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